A WOMAN FOR ALL REASONS
BY PAUL CHANDLER AND NICK GOODMAN
EPISODE ELEVEN:
YOUR WHOLE LIFE STRETCHING OUT BEHIND YOU...
BY NICK GOODMAN
MAIN CHARACTERS
MATTHEW - AN ASSISTANT LIBRARIAN
BOB - A DEPUTY THEATRE MANAGER
DEBS - BOB'S WIFE
AUNTIE ALICE - DEB'S AUNT
EMILY - SENIOR LIBRARY CLERK
KIRSTEN - LIBRARY CLERK
OTHER CHARACTERS - TO BE UPDATED SOON
THE STORY SO FAR:
MATT IS TRYING TO HELP HIS BEST FRIEND, BOB, THROUGH A WRITER'S BLOCK - INVOLVING HIM IN A LOCAL MYSTERY INVOLVING AN INHABITANT WHO APPEARS TO BE OVER-150 YEARS OLD... THEY BEGIN TO PIECE TOGETHER A NUMBER OF CLUES BY SPEAKING TO A RATHER ECCENTRIC LIBRARIAN CALLED EMILY - MEANWHILE, BOB'S WIFE - DEBS - ISN'T COPING SO WELL WITH HER HUSBAND GALLIVANTING AROUND THE TOWN AT ALL HOURS OF THE NIGHT AND SHE HAS CONFIDED HER CONCERNS TO HER TRUSTY AUNT ALICE... MUCH TO DEBS'S DISMAY ALICE TAKES A FAR DEEPER INTEREST IN THE WHOLE MATTER THAN HAD BEEN EXPECTED - TRACING BOB AND MATT'S FOOTSTEPS TO TRY AND DISCOVER WHAT EXACTLY THEY HAVE BEEN UP TO!
A
Woman for all Reasons
By
Paul Chandler and Nick Goodman
Chapter
Eleven: ‘Your Whole Life Stretching Out Behind You’
Draft by Nick
Goodman
SCENE 32. INT. TENTBURY HALL. NIGHT
(A large country home called Tentbury. A grand hall with
pillars, ending in a huge desk with screens above it.
Debs, Alice, Bob, Matt, CB, The Marquis and Kirsten
wander curiously and nervously in. An elderly man in the clothing of a royal
butler steps out to welcome them all. He has long white hair, slightly covering
his eyes)
BUTLER: Welcome! You
all received your text messages.
(All nod or grunt bemused)
Now as you know Mis Walsh has made herself made known
to you. But she wishes to meet all seven of you in- er – person. In a complete
non-sinister and productive way, you know too much!
MATT: (Gulping) Does that mean we won’t be leaving?
BUTLER: It maybe you
may not want to leave after she’s’ spoken to you.
ALICE: Spoken? So,
she is here?
KIRSTEN: She must be
well wrinkly now.
DEBS: (Softly) and deaf.
ALICE: (Turning to Deb) and what?
DEBS: (Louder) and deaf!!
BUTLER: Come this way.
(The butler leads them to the end of the hall. Large
portraits hang on the wall. Five of them at the very end are of Miss Walsh. A
large screen shows chat feed. Another small screen shows shares and
transactions. A CCTV camera glares down at them from a wall)
MARQUIS: (Nervously) Are we being recorded?
BUTLER: How do you
like the boot on the other foot?
(The butler goes behind the giant desk)
KIRSTEN: (Curiously musing) Foot…..
(Looking curiously at the Marquis) Foot.
MARQUIS: Daddy should
have disinherited me when he had the chance! Either way I’m done for.
DEBS: WE might all
be. Apparently ‘We know too much’
BOB: It’s a pity we
can’t enjoy the fact
(Kirsten answers a text message on her phone. She read
it)
KIRSTEN: Sorry, its
Emily. “Have you seen Neville?” Derr no, I’ve finished work. I don’t hang out
with the dweeb.
BUTLER: (Clearing his throat) Can I have your full
attention? You have all worked hard and been in touch in many and various ways
with Dame Constance Walsh. It may be far after her time, but you will all be
familiar with Charlie and The Chocolate Factory? Willy Wonka? He
summoned those children and groomed them to take over his chocolate empire.
CB: I always liked
Mike Teevee best. He was going places.
DEBS: Don’t like the
word groomed. It’s a bit creepy.
MATT: So was Willy
Wonka let’s face it.
BOB: So, Miss Walsh
wants us to be a little old lady in her place?
BUTLER: (Becoming slightly flustered) No, no! But her
influence has been felt in the world. Things have got out of hand and she needs
your help in the ‘Willy Wonka’ way.
BOB: Are you saying
she never intended to send out Golden Tickets as such, but now she wants us to
help her?
BUTLER: She can’t
manage anymore. She has become an online viral phenomenon as you can see from
feeds on the screen above me. She is leaking all over the place! Her assets are
in danger.
MARQUIS: Isn’t it time
she spoke to us herself? I’m sure you need a rest, Granddad.
(The butler steps away from his desk, takes Alice’s
arm gently and leads her to a large elaborate door to the right-hand corner)
BUTLER: Alice isn’t it?
You remember her I understand.
ALICE: (Charmed) That’s right. She taught me the
piano and how to ride a horse. Not at the same time of course. Not to say Morse
Code. I could play the chop sticks in Morse Code by the time I was ten. Be
ready for anything she would say.
(Smiling the butler opens the door, leading to an old
study. It is a cosy, war time era haven for a tomboy. Grey haired, glasses on
the end of her nose, Miss Walsh is sat is a wing chair threading a needle,
stitching part of a Union Jack flag. She is also waxen and completely motionless.
The others follow bar CB)
BUTLER: She has been
working on that since 1953.
(CB enters behind the others, holding a blue plaque he
has retrieved from the butler’s desk)
CB: Since she
died. This is the original plaque from the theatre isn’t it? She died in 1953.
She died preparing for Coronation day. (Reading the plaque) At the age
of 88.
BUTLER: (Sadly) She’s served her Royal Highness ever
since. Without rest.
(Alice grabs the butler by the lapels and shakes him)
ALICE: You had her
stuffed, you insensitive monster!
(The shaken butler’s wig dislodges. A suspicious
Kirsten moves forward and whips the wig off. Underneath in Neville, looking sad
and ashamed)
KIRSTEN: Neville!! I
thought I recognise your voice from the way you said “foot”! What the hell are
you doing? You were supposed to be doing the banking!
ALICE: You know
him??
KIRSTEN: Know him? He’s my boss at the library!!
MATT: I would never
have guessed. I remember him arriving!
(Neville snatches his wig back and folds it
preciously)
NEVILLE: For the
record I didn’t stuff her. I wasn’t even born at the time. It Cooper da Cartre,
the Anglo-French taxidermists.
(Neville moves nearer the immobile Walsh, almost in
awe)
Her family at the time interpreted her dying wishes
rather literally. She wanted her memory to live on. So along with all the
business and information, they had her stuffed. Very patriotically I think
you’ll agree. Every scrap of information of her life was recorded and stored.
Every interview that was ever conducted. She became a thriving, ongoing, living
figurehead of patronage and local business. But there was a clause in it all.
We couldn’t tell a soul that she was dead. That was what her family laid down
and tied up in red tape so tight you wouldn’t believe.
CB: (Holding up the plaque) What about this?
NEVILLE: We didn’t know
it was there. Someone in the arts discovered she had died but didn’t know it
was a secret. We had it removed for continuity purposes.
CB: (Annoyed) And closed The Rook Theatre to boot.
A bit drastic.
NEVILLE: No, that
really was the local council. But it was a happy coincidence.
BOB: (Clicking his fingers at Neville) Your office!
Now!!
(Neville ambles out of the study to his desk beyond.
The others follow, mesmerized by Miss Walsh’s form as they go)
NEVILLE: Cooper da
Cartre are now the lead taxidermists for France’s best loved pets. That was
once they had run out of hoity toities wanting heads on the wall.
MATT: Number one
question – who are you?
KIRSTEN: I told you who
he is!
DEBS: Alright then,
why is he?
NEVILLE: Constance
Walsh was my Great Great (Pause)
I think that’s all the ‘Greats’ – Aunt. I took over from my father running the
businesses. She was patron of practically everything as I’m sure you’ve already
gathered.
CB: But she’s
dead! Sorry to point this out, Squire. Who spooked m then? Who came through
‘Crystal’ and nobbled me?
ALICE: What did I
pick up on my phone?
KIRSTEN: And what are
you doing in the library?
BOB: You’ve been wasting
our time, too mate! All this wild goose chase!
MATT: You’re a
bloody fraud, mate!
NEVILLE: Stop there
everyone! There are answers I need too, you know!
DEBS: Not so many
though!
(Neville sits at his desk, clicking some buttons and
leans back to survey his accusers)
NEVILLE: It was never
meant to be like this. The enormous - and interactive I might add – acquisition of personal and
business data was encoded. None of Constance Walsh’s supposed ongoing presence
within this …
DEBS: Presence?
What, as a ghost?
NEVILLE: (Fidgety) Well no – maybe – but I’m coming to
that. Things have leaked out from that supposed encoded top-secret part of what
we call the Walsh Web. Somehow someone cracked the code. When you two (Pointing
at Matt and Bob) came onto the scene I assumed it was you two.
ALICE: And Debs and
me! Don’t forget us!
NEVILLE: You were my
Plan B suspects.
DEBS: Charming!
KIRSTEN: So why come to
the library?
NEVILLE: An independent
income. I have all I want here except self-respect .
(Bob and Matt each mime violin playing)
I needed to learn as much IT to work this
(He gives his high-tech desk a resentful thump. Up
comes Edmund (as seen in Chapter Seven) on the screen above him. Edmund is sat
in his bedroom on cushions, live online.)
Ahh there you are. Sorry to disturb you.
(Turning to then others) My media monitor – my man in Sydney!
(To Edmund) Any clues?
EDMUND: No, but the
chat room followed the radio show.
BOB: I knew we
shouldn’t have done it!
EDMUND: (To Bob) I’m glad you did. It took the whole
situation to the wire. That’s why we had to pull you out. It was the only way
we could find out for sure whether you were friend or foe. The only problem is
seventy-five thousand followers are thumping their phones, tablets and laptops
wanting more.
NEVILLE: (To Edmund) Well its Team Walsh on the case. Catch you later.
(Neville cuts the connection and turns back to the
assembly before him)
That was Edmund. My damage limitation. He’s been
hyping and fantasying the facts just to throw people off the scent. He has the
time to monitor events. He’s very rich…
KIRSTEN: Is he single?
NEVILLE: He also lives
with his mother.
KIRSTEN: (Under her breathe) Oh! That makes two of us!
CB: So, to get
back to the leak, do you have any failsafe?
NEVILLE: What do you
mean?
CB: I got mind
zapped by something,
ALICE: And we were
chased by imaginary dogs.
NEVILLE: The Walsh Web
contains a virtual reconstruction of Constance Walsh for training purposes. I
think they call it artificial intelligence these days. This is as near to that
as we can get.
MARQUIS: Giving the
impression that she is still alive.
NEVILLE: Legally we had
no choice. It was bound in legislation.
MARQUIS: Stupid!
NEVILLE: You think so?
Take away her date of birth – and death, of course – and you have a figurehead.
So, you don’t know who caused the leak?
MATT: Frankly we
thought it was someone playing a game. A treasure hunt.
NEVILLE: Quite the
reverse. This treasure needs to be put back in the box and locked up tightly.
(Pause) How did and you and your friend get in on the Walsh
world?
(Bob and Matt look at each other puzzled and then at
Neville)
BOB: Well Emily, of
course. She recruited us through Matt.
NEVILLE: (Taken aback) She did what?
MARQUIS: And me before
them! And Billy before me (Pause) Poor Billy!
BOB: She wanted to
know whether Miss Walsh was still alive.
MATT: And more
importantly, why?
NEVILLE: What was she
playing at? I didn’t know she had a hand in all this.
BOB: She gave us a
slide show and presentation of all that she had discovered.
(Neville thumps the much abused hi tech desk)
NEVILLE: Damn cheek!
Under my nose!
KIRSTEN: (To Neville) You run the whole gig and Emily wasn’t
on your radar?
CB: I half
expected her to be here. She stitched me up before.
ALICE: I think she
was interested in the ghost bit. The missing link so to speak. That’s why she
sent...
(Pointing at the Marquis) …the last of the red-hot lovers there
to do us over.
(Neville slumps down, worried in thought)
BOB: (To Neville) So it seems she’s limboed under
your radar.
(He points to the screens above) Are you sure you don’t know where the
leak has come from?
NEVILLE: (Incredulous) Emily? She’s just a control freak librarian.
ALICE: Oh Neville!
NEVILLE: (Waggling a finger at the screens) But I have
gone through this network thousands and thousands of times. I haven’t slept.
KIRSTEN: Meanwhile
Emily seems to have taken over your office. She’s using your computer you know.
All sorts of online stuff. That’s how I overheard about His Grace doing over
Matt and Debs’ place.
NEVILLE: (Clutching his head) Wait a minute – you – she
– my office!
KIRSTEN: When I picked
up my wages. I saw her.
(Neville looks increasingly horrified)
NEVILLE: Oh no!
(Neville flips through a diary on his desk and runs
his finger down a column of writing. He spots something. He collapses back in
his chair with a groan)
DEBS: What it is?
NEVILLE: 11th
February. I activated a link for a client. I activated it using the library computer!!
MATT: Search history
would have done the rest.
KIRSTEN: You pillock!
CB: Why then did
she need of all us if she had the info leaking?
(Alice touches back of CB’s neck and makes him jump)
ALICE: (To CB, whispering) The ghost!
NEVILLE: That I can’t
explain. Like I say there is an interactive profile of my Great, Great
..whatever – Aunt in the web but no way could it act randomly.
CB: Or take people
over.
MARQUIS: She takes
people over all right. She –
(The Marquis looks dumb struck. All look at him
suddenly)
DEBS: What?
MARQUIS: (Ashen faced) She still has a tag on me!!
(The Marquis whips out his mobile and fiddles with it)
With all this, I forgot. It’s still on!
KIRSTEN: That’s all we
need. You’re a pillock too!
MARQUIS: (Panicky) Switch it off! Someone switch it
off!
NEVILLE: Too late for
that. She’s been monitoring us, she’s up to speed. She knows we’re onto her. We
must stop her. Let’s go, no time to lose!
(Neville leaps from his desk and heads for the door
but Mat bars his way)
MATT: Hang on, what
exactly is in all this for us?
NEVILLE: What?
MATT: You’ve had us
chasing our tail. We were recruited by Emily. Why shouldn’t we help her instead
of you?
BOB: Especially as
all this was because you made a bloody fool of yourself.
NEVILLE: But you will be
serving your country to help protect the dignity of one of its finest
stalwarts...
(Bob and Matt pause to think)
BOB: That will do
for now. Come on!
SC.33. INT.
REFERENCE LIBRARY. NIGHT.
(Emily still has an open channel on Neville’s computer
in his office. She has heard everything! The Marquis’ voice comes over the
speakers, panicking and fumbling trying to break the link as they make their
way to the library. He eventually succeeds.
The library
is in partial darkness. It is after hours and one is left – except Emily. She
is rushing around the aisles of the library, books in hand. She is a state of
both frustration and elation down one aisle she drags a chair to the centre of
the ref library. It is there a table is set with a candle standing ready. She
dumps the books onto the table and attends to a device she has set up in front
of the table. It is a microphone stand lashed up with wires, topped with an
old-fashioned radio loudspeaker. She then checks the library clock: nearly
10pm.
Like a mad
scientist she flips through the books, bookmarking passages and muttering to
herself. She stops to think then produces the pamphlet she created about Miss
Walsh (seen in Chapter Three)
EMILY: In case I forget anything important.
(She gets herself comfortable and presses a switch on
her microphone stand lash up. She then closes her eyes. A gentle static starts
up. A few moments concentration then…)
Constance Walsh. Dame. Entrepreneur. Patron. I call to
thee. I say I call to thee. I’m not sure why you would accept ‘thee’ rather
than ‘you’ as a term of address, but you have to play the game I guess. I have
discovered some details about your life. I have followed your career. My name
is Emily Bradnock. My Great Great Grandfather was the only man you ever loved –
as I understand. Peregrine Pope was his name. I think you remember him? You
nearly married him. Your brother talked you out of it. So, Constance – I am
your spiritual Great Great Grandchild.
(A few aisles away and being as quiet as possible,
Bob, Matt, Debs, Alice, CB, Kirsten and the Marquis creep ever nearer to the
bizarre séance, listening intently)
I know you came to CB through his old rubbish radio
set. I give you my own rubbish radio set up. I perceive you would prefer to
communicate through this kind of technology from your own era. You reached out
to CB. You are there! You cannot hide from me any longer!
(Neville stares through a gap in the books in
disbelief)
Others have tried to reach out for you since you have
leaked into the world once again. A whole gang of them in fact. A nest of
vipers. Family too. Speak only to me Constance Walsh. For the love of
Peregrine, I am the only one you can trust.
(At last there comes a faint voice…)
VOICE: Is that you Emily?
EMILY: (Suddenly
bolt upright) Grandmama, I’m here!
VOICE: What do you want of me?
EMILY: To talk. We must talk. You must let me in.
Confide in me. I am that Grandchild you never had.
VOICE: You are nothing of the kind.
(Alice appears at the corner of the nearest aisle in
Emily’s view. Hers was the voice)
ALICE: You’re just a very naughty girl!
EMILY: Get away from here you silly old cow. This is
a seance!
ALICE: You want her soul because you think it’s out
there.
CB: Sheer sentimental crap. It’s a si-developed
aspect of the Walsh Web.
ALICE: (To
CB) Oh do be quiet!
NEVILLE: (Stepping
forward) If she is out there, she must be left alone. Haven’t you done
enough damage? You cracked the code.
EMILY: Of all the devious, sanctimonious two faced…
it was you that ordered all those books about Walsh?
NEVILLE: I wanted her represented.
EMILY: You were careless. That is what raised my
interest. I started putting it all together.
NEVILLE: Why?
EMILY: My family never forgot the name Walsh. I
could have been where you are!
NEVILLE: I am blood kin to her. I run the Walsh Web.
In that capacity I order you to stop this invasion.
EMILY: And disappoint my public. The storm I’ve
created won’t just go away. Millions will know all there is to know. All I want
them to know should I say! But I will be including my Great Great Grandfather
in the equation too. That’s where I came in.
KIRSTEN: You can’t do this.
EMILY: (To
Kirsten) Rank has its privileges.
(To the others)
Since all your efforts to locate her on a spiritual plane have failed, I have
had to jury rig my own link up with her.
NEVILLE: You released the web, but you haven’t been
able to control it and collate the information.
Dame Constance ‘presence’ is the key to it all!
KIRSTEN: (Angered)
You put my family in jeopardy will all this public crap!!
EMILY: (Scathing)
What family? A dead mother? A scrounging drunken father…
KIRSTEN: (Screaming)
My little boy, you bitch!!
(Kirsten lunges for Emily but moves too near the
loudspeaker. She stares ahead and goes rigid. Matt and Bob run forward to help
her, but Alice holds them back)
ALICE: No, don’t touch her. I think Dame Constance
has landed!
DEBS: I’ve phone for an ambulance!
ALICE: No, she’ll be alright.
EMILY: (Outraged)
Child! What have you done?
BOB: (To
Emily) What have you done you mean!
(An ethereal smile and calm comes over Kirsten and she
speaks with the speech pattern of an old woman)
KIRSTEN: All this shouting! Calm down everyone. Calm
down.
NEVILLE: Sorry Auntie – Great, Great…
KIRSTEN: Where am I?
EMILY: The local library. Did you hear what I said
earlier?
KIRSTEN: Did you ask me something?
EMILY: Do you know who I am?
KIRSTEN: Not exactly.
NEVILLE: (Getting
nearer) Auntie, my name’s Neville. I’m your Great Great Nephew. Possibly
even greater. I run your business and family affairs.
EMILY: (To
Kirsten) He’s betrayed you! He’s opened the floodgate to your business and
personal secrets. I can help you.
KIRSTEN: Can you dear, that’s good of you.
EMILY: Peregrine Pope. You remember him, don’t you?
KIRSTEN: (Frowning)
Peregrine?
EMILY: You loved him. He proposed to you.
(Kirsten turns in thought. In the shadows, the other
confer)
BOB: (To
Matt) What’s going on?
MATT: The séance seems to have worked. Old Dame
Connie has taken over Kirsten just she did CB. With very different results of course.
CB: I was hypnotised. There was nothing
supernatural about it.
ALICE: Your old junk couldn’t hypnotise anyone.
Neither could her set up. Your mind just couldn’t rashionise it. Which is why
she came to you in bits and pieces at the shack.
CB: What are we supposed to?
MATT: Nothing. We have to hope Neville has history
on his side.
BOB: History?
DEBS: You heard Emily. She’s the sprog of some old
lover.
MATT: Suitor if you don’t mind! They didn’t have
lovers back then.
ALICE: Oh yeah?
(Back at the table)
EMILY: (Pointing
at Neville) He’s a careless incompetent. He let your information out for
all to see!
NEVILLE: It wasn’t like that, Auntie. The modern world
has computers. So much information can be instantly be available at your
fingertips. I protected the personal stuff.
KIRSTEN: Peregrine! I remember him!
EMILY: (Excited)
You do? Do you remember him proposing?
KIRSTEN: (Smiling
distantly) I do so.
EMILY: Why didn’t you just say yes to him? One short
word!
KIRSTEN: But I couldn’t possibly.
EMILY: Why not?
KIRSTEN: I was already engaged to four others.
CB: (Hollering)
Gold digger!!
EMILY: (Horrified)
Wha…..?
KIRSTEN: I lost all idea of what I said to whom. Best
to leave it. I had so many meetings to attend. Dogs to look after. Scout camps
to run.
EMILY: (Crying)
But you loved him!
(Kirsten come up to Emily and puts her hand on her
shoulders)
KIRSTEN: Sweetheart, I loved everyone. That’s why I
helped all those services. I did my bit. My country. My chance to make a
difference. Besides, what would you have done with my world?
(Pointing at Neville)
Just look at my Great Great .. err … Nephew? Juggling
two jobs. Overworked. Lonely. Confused. Desperate for help.
NEVILLE: (To
Kirsten) So you do know me!
(Kirsten clasps Emily’s head in both her hands)
KIRSTEN: Now it’s time you to do your bit. Whatever
gobbledegook you unlocked, lock it up again. I’ll help you.
(Passively both girls walk trance-like into Neville’s
still open office and sit by the computer.
NEVILLE: (Calling
out) Great Great Auntie? You do know you’ll go home as soon as the link is
cut.
KIRSTEN: (From
the office) If you say so dear. Goodbye.
(Overcome Neville slumps into the now empty séance
chair, sobbing with relief. The others move to him)
ALICE: (Looking
on) Poor Constance. A true legend.
BOB: A reluctant legend.
ALICE: She never did get around to marriage.
MATT: What’s happening?
CB: Hypnotism. I bet she wanted to find out the
secret.
BOB: Pity she’s not awake to appreciate it.
DEBS: Are they resetting the privacy settings? The
code thingy?
MATT: That and hopefully blockers all unwelcome
callers.
NEVILLE: But if I don’t know the new password, how
will I get on the system back at Tentbury?
CB: Well you wanted help, didn’t you?
NEVILLE: What?
ALICE: Yes, that’s true. (To Neville) You
made out you were a Willy Wonka figure when you summoned us to your hideout.
But you’re really more The Wizard of Oz. A little man struggling to control a
big machine. I think it’s time you showed us your Willy again!
(Everyone looks shocked)
Of the Wonka variety that is!
NEVILLE: Well we can talk about that when we are back
at the hall.
DEBS: Well, I could do with a pint after all this.
NEVILLE: (Looking
at his watch) It must be gone last orders by now.
CB: We know a gaff which never closes. Well, it
never seems to.
(There is the sound of a crash. All look towards
Neville’s office. Emily lies slumped over the computer. Kirsten reels dazed.
She comes gingerly out of the office. She pops some gum in her mouth and
reassuringly chews it.
DEBS: (Hugging
Kirsten) Kirsten, you little darling. You saved us all!!
KIRSTEN: I did?
CB: Devilishly clever impression!
(Alice jabs CB in the ribs)
Oww!
BOB: (To Kirsten)
It’s over. Neville has a proposition for us all.
KIRSTEN: (Vaguely)
Proposition? Why does that ring a bell?
MATT: He has something for all of us. Even…
(The Marquis of Hamilton crawls whimpering out of the
shadows, stopping at Kirsten’s feet)
MARQUIS: Dame Constance, can you ever forgive me? You
see all my vices from your high place. I beg forgiveness for my indiscretions.
I will serve you to my dying day.
(Kirsten leans down to face him and blows a bubble gum
bubble which pops in his face. She then giggles and kisses)
KIRSTEN: You know what? You are strangely sexy when you
grovel. You still up for serving me?
SC.34. INT. ‘THE LUMINARY TAVERN’.
NIGHT.
(All back to the
actors’ pub for the finale, our story ending as it had begun in a pub as it
began. All except Emily are in The Casket as seen in Chapter Six. Everyone,
including Alice, are downing a pint)
BOB: (Checking
his phone) Well the hoax warning is out. But there will always be those you
won’t believe it was. But that’s social media for you. The conspiracy theories
will be fun to read.
CB: They were certainly fun to create.
MATT: (Raising
a glass) To Kirsten – and Constance Walsh. A team amongst teams!
(All raise a
glass to Kirsten who blushes)
KIRSTEN: I just don’t remember any of it.
CB: (Sarcastic)
Yeah right!
MARQUIS: Well you might have told me when you were out
of the fluence!
KIRSTEN: No way, I was enjoying it too much!
ALICE: (To
Marquis) You still owe me a hard drive. Your Grace. How about grovelling to
me?
(Everyone turns
to Neville who is looking into his pint)
NEVILLE: (Wistfully)
“I’m a good man but a bad wizard”.
MATT: What possessed you to hire Emily in the first
place?
NEVILLE: Her IT skills were superb. She was also
suitably odd. I thought it would detract from me and my activities. I also
needed to learn from someone good to keep up with all the high-tech data at
Tentbury.
DEBS: Instead of which she learnt from you!
NEVILLE: If I hadn’t made that transaction from my
office! Still, I won’t do that again!
CB: What are you going to do with Emily?
NEVILLE: Well, when she woke up…
BOB: Don’t tell me! All memory of recent events
was wiped from her mind. It was all like a bad dream. Not that old cliché!
NEVILLE: No, not quite. She was very quiet, but she
offered her resignation fairly promptly before going home.
ALICE: Where is she going?
NEVILLE: To live with her sister and her family in
Bangor.
ALICE: Does her sister know this?
NEVILLE: (Smiling)
I shouldn’t think so.
CB: Now Mr ‘Bad Wizard’…
NEVILLE: I owe you all a great deal for saving my Great
Great – possibly even greater – Aunt – from public exposure. But it’s nice to
know she is still amongst us..
CB: Albeit in a mannequin.
(All frown at CB
who relents)
Sorry.
NEVILLE: Kirsten, would you like to be become my
Deputy Head Librarian?
KIRSTEN: (Putting
a playful hand on the Marquis’ knee) Well, I have had a word with his
Grace. We have decided to go into partnership.
MARQUIS: It’s my way of giving something back to
society.
ALICE: (Raising
her eyebrows) Now that is a cliché.
DEBS: You’re giving porn back to society???
MARQUIS: Oh no! Socially aware films.
KIRSTEN: About single mothers for a start!
NEVILLE: You’re going to need patrons.
MARQUIS: It would help,
NEVILLE: (To
Marquis) The Walsh Trust has enough of those. Keep the sleaze out we’re all
yours
(To Kirsten)
On condition we can have you part time at the library.
(Kirsten laughs
and happily swigs her pint)
KIRSTEN: It’s all coming together!
MARQUIS: I’m still worried. Emily told me she had one
of my naughty films on YouTube and could break the embargo on it.
KIRSTEN: You believed her? Look mate, if you can’t see
it, how do you know it’s there?
MARQUIS: Do you mean….
KIRSTEN: She was pulling your whatsit. And for once
you didn’t want it pulled!
(To CB)
We’ll need an engineer. Would you be up for that?
CB: Oh, I can’t keep up with all this modern
stuff.
MATT: Only because people didn’t let you. You were
elbowed out from these places. You’ll be okay.
DEBS: It will get you out of that crappy railway
shed too.
CB: It will take some time to getting used to it.
NEVILLE: The technology?
CB: No, being wanted again.
KIRSTEN: Bob, Matt, we’re going to need script writers.
MARQUIS: I’ve got scripts!
KIRSTEN: Like I say, we’re going to need script
writers!!
MATT: (To
Bob) Told you I would get you writing again!
BOB: How will we ever top this little escapade.
We’ve had sex (Pointing at the Marquis)
Violence (Pointing
at CB who rubs her head) Ghosties (Pointing at Kirsten) and a big
button pushing baddy (Pointing at Neville)!
NEVILLE: (Affronted)
I’m not a baddy!
BOB: Only joking! Although we’ll never really
know whether Dame Constance was with in spirit or virtual intelligence. Like
Alexa gone mad!!
KIRSTEN: What we would have in mind for scripts is
something a little more down to Earth.
DEBS: Like ‘Cathy Come Home’?
MATT: In our old days it would have been ‘Cathy
Come Home – to Mars’!
NEVILLE: If you could write us some promotional pieces
for the Walsh Trust that would be the icing on the cake.
(To Debs)
and Debs…
DEBS: Oh no, I don’t want any fancy jobs thank you,
I’ll miss my soaps too much.
NEVILLE: Well I think that about wraps it up.
ALICE: (Putting
her glass down firmly) Hold it, what about me?
NEVILLE: You Alice?
ALICE: Yes me!! Who actually met Constance Walsh?
Who came looking for these two twits? (Pointing at Matt and Bob) Who
recorded a vital clue? Need I go on?
MATT: Don’t you want to take it easy after all
this?
ALICE: No, I bloody well don’t!! You haven’t given
my contribution a moment’s thought, have you? Well thank you so much!!
(Alice storms
off. Debs goes to see to her but Matt waves her back down)
NEVILLE: Let’s start again shall we?
(Alice storms
down the stairs to the bar below where Graham the barman has his head on the
bar crying)
ALICE: Hello dear, what’s up?
GRAHAM: It’s gone!
ALICE: What’s gone?
GRAHAM: The head!
ALICE: Whose head?
GRAHAM: (Looking
up, tear stained) Sweetheart, there is only one head. Johnny. The one that
was up there covered in blood. Hated the wretched thing myself but the punters
adore him. What’s Big Bruno going to say?
ALICE: (Leaning
on the bar) Pull yourself together man! What are you talking about?
GRAHAM: (Tightly)
There is a paper gauche severed head that lives on the shelf up there. It was
left over from the previous ghouls that ran this boozer. We call him Johnny.
Someone has stolen it. Savvy, Grandma?
ALICE: (Releasing
Graham) There, that was nice and clear. There have been enough muddy waters
recently.
GRAHAM: You’re with those two writer blokes aren’t
you? Can’t they investigate this for us?
(Alice goes to
return to The Casket, but she stops and turns back to Graham)
ALICE: No, nuts to them. I’m the one you need to
solve this.
GRAHAM: (Dabbing
his eyes) You? Can you do that?
ALICE: It’s becoming a habit!
(Smugly Alice
dusts off a bar stool and sits)
Brandy.
(Graham obliges)
Now tell me that
whole story from the start…
THE END
FACT FILE
It had been exactly
a year since Chapter Ten. Around that time, Paul and I were feeling that the
story was coming to a natural end and the next couple of chapters should wrap
it up. I engineered a cliff-hanger for Chapter Ten that would deliberately
bring the story to a head. The only problem is it was a cliff-hanger neither of
us knew how to resolve.
During 2019, Paul and I had various discussions as to how to approach the last chapter. I suggested if I submitted a draft, Paul could develop it, making it a joint last episode. Our last joint written venture, (Sutton Park - Prison in the Sun, 1993), was written on a bench in some public gardens. It would not have been practical to have repeated this.
One of the problems
we were faced was that we have a scenario that could either have been explained
away by science or fantasy. Going completely one way or the other could have
disappointed. My solution was a mixture with a single question still hanging in
the air. As it was still untitled, I offered a working title of A Woman for
All Reasons.
My draft Chapter
Eleven began writing (in long hand) on Saturday 14th December 2019.
I was resolved to use an established character as the force behind events. The
unveiling of Neville was a gentle nod to Scooby Doo. His elusiveness led
me to believe he would be a good reveal. I returned Edmund from Chapter Seven.
I felt there were hints there that suggested he was a little more than just an
interested member of the public and had powerful connections. The only question
left was – was Constance Walsh’s ghost available online? Or did the website
have a side effect? The thought I would return The Luminary Tavern for
everyone to assess the situation. This way we finished as we began with a talk
in a pub. Paul had suggested Bob and Matt getting a call that might lead to
another mission. I have here offered a slight variation on this with Aunt Alice
going solo on his own mission!
Stopping only to
listen to The Festival of Nine Lessons and Carols on the radio, I
completely my long hand first draft on Christmas Eve 2019 at 5.15pm. I spent
the Christmas break typing up the draft and re-reading the previous chapters. I
had approached the chapter by getting down the solution in writing as I saw it
before tweaking things after re-reading the previous scripts. The other way
around I considered might have put me off with too many challenges.
I think the end
result is a fun caper which never quite got as far fetched as both Paul and I
are capable of going.